I hope you like what you read, I hope it touches you, maybe even inspires you. Please write some comments, as all I hear are my own voices, and they are certainly not detached enough to make constructive critics; although most of the recent work is quite 'raw'...in that I pretty much leave whats comes out as it is. Refinement is fine, but it can take off the edge. For me my poems are a little like flowers...I try and leave them to stand on their own...if i try too hard to mould them then somehow they lose some naturalness, and become slightly contrived articles created to structures that are imposed rather than organic.
Thanks for looking.
Take it eazi x





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**That which does not kill us, makes us stranger...**
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This space shall remain blank until I find something interesting to say.
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*** i see different so i'm doing photograpy for you to see my way too***I LoVe PhOtOgRaPhY ***
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~Yuke Pride~
First, I wanted to thank you for adding Maybe... to your faves.
For some reason I felt compelled to read through your poetry, and I was entangled in your words. I was going to comment on just one, but then I realized that the ones that caught my attention were all connected in my mind.
While reading your poems, it was as though every thought in my mind had manifested itself onto the screen in a comprehensive flow of words. You are a truly a master of the written word.
Perhaps we'll have the chance to speak more sometime.
Until then, do take care.
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And in my darkest moment, fetal and weeping
The moon tells me a secret - my confidant
As full and bright as I am
This light is not my own and
A million light reflections pass over me
-Tool
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And in my darkest moment, fetal and weeping
The moon tells me a secret - my confidant
As full and bright as I am
This light is not my own and
A million light reflections pass over me
-Tool
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F. R. Smith
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Neque porro quisquam est qui dolorem ipsum quia dolor sit amet, consectetur, adipisci velit...
There is no one who loves pain itself, who seeks after it and wants to have it, simply because it is pain...
~Poetic-Disturbance a little club I'm in.
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